Your heart like tranquil waters,
Smooth sailing,
On peaceful seas,
Suddenly halted,
By the crashing wave,
Of my outburst.
Set adrift,
By my choppy undercurrent;
The life inside your heart,
Now as tepid water,
Stagnant and clipped…
Thankfully raised up,
In the wake of,
My amends.
Your waves of forgiveness,
Soothe my silakbo.
-Gilda Patricia
Written for Word High July-30 Beautiful Filipino Words
Day 8- silakbo- meaning: emotional outburst.
Challenge set by A Reading Writer’s Blog, and Doodles and Scribbles.
https://areadingwritr.wordpress.com/2016/06/30/word-high-july-welcome/
Beautiful thoughts !
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Thank you Miracle!
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Oh my, this goes right to heart’s depths–wonderfully written.
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Such a thoughtful comment, thanks!
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Most welcome 🙂
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awwww. this is like a roller coaster ride with a lovely ending. Great! ❤
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I like that analogy, thanks!
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you’re welcome! 😀
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Awwee… There is no better way to melt one’s silakbo than a forgiving heart.. Lovely piece, Gilda! 😊
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And your thoughtful comment melts my heart, thanks!
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Love the metaphor of water! ❤
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Thank you Sailaja!
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Wow, I love how you related love and forgiveness to water and the sea!! The sea can be very powerful and deep, but so can love, so they intertwine so well in this metaphor ❤
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Thanks! Glad you like!😊
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