Poetry does nothing,
But sometimes it moves us…
Like a sunrise or a song,
Or falling in love.
That ah ha! moment hitting us is
The Holy Spirit moving through us,
In all his glory, each time shifting
Our perceptions,
Unlocking one more door inside our hearts,
Melting one more frozen heart layer…
And finally when all the layers of lies and
Untruth are peeled away,
What’s left but a beating heart,
Fresh and pure as the driven snow,
And just as silent.
–Gilda Patricia
(This poem was inspired by Davy D. of Inside the Mind of Davy D.
From his June 5th 2017 post “Poetry makes nothing happen.” -W.H. Auden)
Truly beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
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Awww, thank you so much! 🙂
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you for saying Swalia!🌸
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Nice poetry Gilda. I like your description of peeling away the layers to get to the heart and silence of who we really are. Thank you for taking the seed from the poetic motivation and helping it grow.
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Thanks so much for your insight! You understand perfectly.
And you’re welcome.🌷🌹🌷🌹🌷
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🙂
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Lovely write Gilda !
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Thanks so very much Kamakhya!😊
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Nice! Thanks for sharing a DavyD inspired piece
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The pleasure is mine and thanks so much for stopping by! 😀🌻
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oh my. this is so true. so beautiful. aaah. ❤
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Your comment makes my smile. So glad you read and liked it Rosema!
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awww. glad to do that! 🙂
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Oh Gilda.. How I am so touched! Absolutely inspiring!
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I am so very happy to hear that! Thanks for making me smile.😀🌼🌈🌤
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Indeed!
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Hi Gilda- I was hoping that you would give your permission for us to post this on the Inspiration Wall of the Go Dog Go Cafe.
Regards,
Christine
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Absolutely! It would be my pleasure.😀 Thanks.
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